Thursday, April 9, 2009

A & P retold

Don Sampo
James Hepworth
English 150
April 9, 2009
Retelling the story
A & P

Three girls walk in wearing very little clothing. I am at home listening to my son tell me about his day at work. I am not pleased by the result of his unemployment. These girls are hanging out by the bread section. One chunky girl is wearing a plaid bathing suit. She has a good tan, and she has bleach blond hair with blue eyes. An older woman, a witch, gives my son a difficult time. She is fifty years old, and she likes to watch the cash register employees. She tries to get Sammy to make mistakes.
Another one of the chunky girls is wearing a bright green two piece bathing suit. This girl acts as though she is attractive and striking, but she is not. She has long black hair with brown eyes. The third girl is considered the queen or the leader of the group. She has reddish hair with hazel eyes. She wears a dirty pink or beige bathing suit with the straps down. She walks upright with her head held high to show herself off.
The three girls cruise down the aisle fumbling with various food products. Some women in the store are shocked to see these girls scantily clad in the store. Stokesie is an employee of the store. Stokesie joins in with a smart remark. “Oh Daddy, I feel so faint.”
Here they are, three girls wandering around in the marketplace with nothing on. They could have went to the beach and showed off their bodies. These girls insisted on displaying themselves to everyone in the store. They come over to the register where Sammy is working. Queenie pulls out a dollar from her bathing suit top to pay for the Fancy Herring in Pure Sour Cream.
Lengel is the manager of A & P, and he is the Sunday school teacher at the Congregational Church. Lengel starts telling the girls, “This isn’t a beach.” “Girls, this isn’t a beach,” Lengel repeats. The girl in plaid says, “We weren’t doing any shopping, we just came in for the one thing.” “We were having a swell time.” Lengel says, “That makes no difference. We want you decently dressed when you come in here.”
“We are decent and cool too,” says Queenie. “Girls, I don’t want to argue with you, says Lengel. After this, make sure you come in here with your shoulders covered. It’s our policy.” Sammy says, “I quit” to Lengel, quick and loud enough so others could hear. Sammy repeated, “I quit.” Lengel didn’t like that. Lengel tells Sammy not to do this to me or his mom. Lengel and I have been friends for years.
“You’ll feel this for the rest of your life,” said Lengel. Lengel takes over Sammy’s spot at the cash register. My son is wondering if he made a big mistake by quitting his job. He will have a rough time without an income.

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